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Updated: 2017-09-13T20:36:43.026+02:00

 



Well, you had to be a Facebooker to get the Pocaho...

2007-05-10T02:15:00.000+02:00

Well, you had to be a Facebooker to get the Pocahontas bit. There was this chain personality test going around, and everybody seemed to be Pocahontas--rebellious and independent--except me, Cinderella!



The repitition of the no's in the first stanza I f...

2007-05-09T22:21:00.000+02:00

The repitition of the no's in the first stanza I felt was weak, 'no purpose, no excuses,/.../No point--except the blankness of the night./
No value--except the nagging of the void./
Nothing.'

'like stuffed animals in tree branches.' I liked this one.

I wish I knew the story behind Pocahontas because I did not get it.

Love,
Ton frère Ahmad



i am pocahontas. the first stanza is so true, and...

2007-05-04T16:48:00.000+02:00

i am pocahontas.



the first stanza is so true, and so true for any writer; but most significantly the poet.

it's nice when you write, and i visit after too long a time only to find you've posted something new only a day or two ago.

like i know when it's time for you to write soon.