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By: seanachi

Fri, 17 Aug 2007 11:45:52 +0000

“If anything in there didnâ€(image) t know we were coming, it knows now,” I whispered. Now that's just darn foreboding.

By: Nicole

Mon, 13 Aug 2007 15:29:30 +0000

I agree with Genna - I'm okay with spiders as long as I can see them, too. But I am fully convinced that, given the option, they would rather play in my hair than stay nice and safe in their webs.

By: Bri

Sat, 11 Aug 2007 06:09:42 +0000

That was great - very realistic and creepy and..bleh! Spiders and guano and narrow places - all in one snippet! Very nice :D

By: joelysue

Sat, 11 Aug 2007 02:04:49 +0000

Oh, man, what a killer. Just the thought of spiders and bats in my hair freaks me out!

By: cherylp

Sat, 11 Aug 2007 00:05:27 +0000

Yeesh. I hate spiders. I know just how Genna feels--nasty, creepy things dropping on your head, crawling in your hair....crap. Now I'll be on the lookout for the evil little things all night.

By: PolarBear

Fri, 10 Aug 2007 22:30:10 +0000

Nope. No bats here. ... Just snakes.

By: PJ

Fri, 10 Aug 2007 20:49:10 +0000

Wow. What a heart-stopping moment. After my MRI yesterday (closed), I wouldn't want to be wedged in some place I couldn't escape from easily. Creepy. Hope nothing too nasty comes for them. :-D

By: Ann

Fri, 10 Aug 2007 20:14:54 +0000

That's one big cave they're coming to. Great snippet, nice and creepy.

By: Jess

Fri, 10 Aug 2007 19:43:49 +0000

I love your descriptions of the echoes! And that's one cave I wouldn't want to be in either. *shudders with Joy Renee* ewww.

By: IanT

Fri, 10 Aug 2007 17:15:07 +0000

My angry whisper scuttled forward to add its rustling-paper sounds to the diminishing chorus of shouts. Good line. :-)