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Updated: 2011-11-28T07:59:25.667-06:00

 



Thank you Mary! I've struggled with this beginning...

2008-11-14T13:18:00.000-06:00

Thank you Mary! I've struggled with this beginning for awhile. She knows Drake but somehow I wanted him to appear sinister. Your thoughts are MUCH appreciated!!



Wow!!That certainly helped me be on the look-out f...

2008-11-14T00:48:00.000-06:00

Wow!!
That certainly helped me be on the look-out for verbs with six-packs.
Thanks



Oooh, great thoughts Mary!I'm still having so much...

2008-11-13T12:12:00.000-06:00

Oooh, great thoughts Mary!

I'm still having so much trouble with this. I'll send you something of mine soon- my show vs. tell is terrible!

Thanks!



Nicely done. Thanks for this.

2008-11-13T11:25:00.000-06:00

Nicely done. Thanks for this.