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More Jake Bible than you can probably stand!



Last Build Date: Mon, 04 Dec 2017 16:07:30 +0000

 



By: thousandheads

Wed, 11 Jan 2012 21:32:52 +0000

I'm posting thic comment only because I forget to click the "notify me for follow ups" box. So there!



By: thousandheads

Wed, 11 Jan 2012 21:15:44 +0000

Best line: "I have the muscle mass of a Rice Krispie Treat." All together an engaging beginning. I'd have some writery feedback if she wants it but on the whole I like the start and I'm interested in the character- especially why she's meeting this mysterious T.H. in such a sketchy part of time. Particularly enjoy the bit of background about how her dad drove a bus and how that set up the character's expectations. Is there a link for more?



By: jakebible

Mon, 09 Jan 2012 20:40:07 +0000

Excellent! Let me know what you think. Cheers!



By: jakebible

Mon, 09 Jan 2012 20:39:50 +0000

Glad you could make it! :)



By: thousandheads

Mon, 09 Jan 2012 19:16:22 +0000

Just loaded this up on my nook. Looking forward to taking a read soon.



By: Rachel Howzell Hall (@RachelHowzell)

Sat, 07 Jan 2012 18:31:25 +0000

Thanks for inviting me over, Jake!