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By: Kian Ann

Fri, 28 Nov 2008 02:14:24 +0000

Hey Rose! No worries, I love feedback! Yeah, I'm not a poem writer :P It was just for the fun of it. I just tried to make it rhyme. Heh, didn't know there was so much study behind the form and all the "A B A B" stuff.

By: rose

Fri, 28 Nov 2008 02:03:21 +0000

:sad: first of all, sorry if im too critical, but id say try again.(sorry!!!!) your rhyming is GREAT so the only thing i need to say is you need to write in a different form. lik maybe a b a b form. heres an example, i wrote this on my cell: empty pangs of silence hand around me without tone but its only when im with so many i feel the most alone so i think that would be a good form. its my fav. or u can mix it u into a different form, lik A A BB A. thats also good plzzzzzzz dont get mad at my criticism. its actually good for something riding on a bus.