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Updated: 2017-09-27T14:31:04.804+05:30

 



a few scattered words sweet poet and you've ma...

2010-02-19T06:44:48.256+05:30

a few scattered words sweet poet
and you've managed to write my
journal in a few short lines...
how could you know?



"Yearning" - great word you used here an...

2010-02-16T22:04:25.401+05:30

"Yearning" - great word you used here and to me, is the essence of the poem. I am grateful you let us into this intimate moment through your words. THANK YOU.



Nicely done and sweet! I really enjoyed it! Pamel...

2010-02-15T04:30:43.053+05:30

Nicely done and sweet!
I really enjoyed it!

Pamela



nicely done Gautami..from the heart indeed....spec...

2010-02-14T05:37:03.094+05:30

nicely done Gautami..from the heart indeed....special this Valentine weekend



Very nice, Gautami. Its scale is perfectly suited ...

2010-02-13T22:26:52.522+05:30

Very nice, Gautami. Its scale is perfectly suited to its subject, the small world of a small girl, stretching to grow into a world.

I particularly like:

she sketches her mother too
the face being blurred


...the way it suggests that the child only ever partly knows the parent. The relationship is felt and intuited, but the person is always an enigma...



I'm sure you don't want criticism because ...

2010-02-13T01:57:21.991+05:30

I'm sure you don't want criticism because it's a good poem. But - for what it's worth - it's written from an observer's point of view and too much is said about the child's intent from that POV. Otherwise - it's a wonderfully sensitive poem. One line there - can't see it from this comment area - clinks as too much insight on POV's part.



Wonderful view from a child's eye - well done!...

2010-02-12T09:51:13.763+05:30

Wonderful view from a child's eye - well done!



Heart rending Gautami... ;(

2010-02-12T03:49:50.486+05:30

Heart rending Gautami... ;(



A touching capture of childhood. I wonder how many...

2010-02-12T03:01:20.369+05:30

A touching capture of childhood. I wonder how many millions of children have drawn in crayon they and their parents holding hands with all the other pleasant observations of innocence? Tis a shame we leave off yarn and ballons and stars and...holding hands. I loved it!
Regards,
Donald



You did a very good job of breaking out of your cu...

2010-02-12T02:41:23.936+05:30

You did a very good job of breaking out of your customary style and theme to write about a small, sad child. It was beautifully done...



that was brilliant... lonely and sad, and so touch...

2010-02-12T00:19:14.806+05:30

that was brilliant... lonely and sad, and so touching ...



I don't know why I find that ball of yarn so a...

2010-02-11T21:44:04.538+05:30

I don't know why I find that ball of yarn so appealing, but it seems an unusually apt touch.



Ms. Tripathy: I abhor commenting off-topic. Howeve...

2010-02-11T21:34:18.881+05:30

Ms. Tripathy: I abhor commenting off-topic. However, you have challenged me with your past post; I reply in the present and now you are toast as well as “plastered…”



Indeed lonely.

2010-02-11T20:15:13.824+05:30

Indeed lonely.



blizzard watch the toddler colors outside the line...

2010-02-11T08:30:26.050+05:30

blizzard watch
the toddler colors
outside the lines